MY LIFE SO FAR
My name is Jessica Martin and I am six years old. I live in York 19th December 1997 . I was a good baby and I did not keep Mum awake at night. When I was 3, Baz was born. He was not a good baby! He cried all the time and kept us all awake.
Not long after Baz was born, I started at playgroup and met my best friend Hannah. We had lots of fun playing in the house and dressing up. At the age of 4, I had chicken pox. It made me very itchy and Mum dabbed my spots with pink medicine. Soon after that, I started school. Hannah and I were in Mrs Robinson‛s class. It was fun because we played all day. Next we went into Mrs Bennett‛s class. That was when I learned to read and write. Mrs Bennett read us lots of stories.
Last September I moved up into Mr Long‛s class, and now I am learning my times tables.
The Analysis of “My Life So far”
Generic Structure
Orientation : Paragraph 1 line 1-2
My name … … … brother Baz.
Events : Paragraph 1 line 2-5
Paragraph 2
I was born … … … lots of stories.
Reorientation : Last paragraph
Language features analysis
Noun : hospital, playgroup, chicken pox, medicine, stories
Material process : cried, playing, read, write
Simple Past tense : I was born…, I did not keep…, he was not good baby,
he cried…, we had lots of fun…, I moved up… etc.
he cried…, we had lots of fun…, I moved up… etc.
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